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Hemingway and Writing Style

Posted by Mark Shaw on October 28, 2008

Listen up Hemingwaywantabes because if you want to learn from the master, you might consider reading Hemingway, The Final Years by Michael Reynolds. It is a fascinating book in terms of telling the Hemingway story, but it is also filled with jewels of information regarding his writing style.

For instance, at page 145, the biographer notes, “[Hemingway] never knew precisely what was going to happen in any book he wrote; whatever plants he had always went astray when the story got away from him. So he lived in the book, inventing it day by day, letting it develop organically.”

Yes, some great words of wisdom. Are you living in your book?

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Hemingway and Collaborations

Posted by Mark Shaw on October 15, 2008

To jumpstart a publishing career, many authors like myself, have collaborated with well-known people to assist them with writing their memoir, autobiography, or book of wisdom. Don’t forget that a collaboration differs from ghostwriting since most of the time with the former your name appears with the author on the cover of the book providing some notoriety and potential acclaim if the book sells well. When a writer ghostwrites a book, they unually remain anonymous, and thus are not recognized as much.

I talked about how to choose a well-known person in a previous posting, but if you do agree to collaborate, the first thing to decide is the percentage interest for both parties. If you as collaborator can get 50%, that is a pretty, darn good deal. But remember that your main purpose beyond making a few bucks to pay the rent and feed the Labrador, is gain a credential as a published author or co-author as the case may be. To assist your efforts, hemingwaywantabes, with an agreement, here is a sample you might consider:

Sample Collaboration Agreement

With Comments

(Tips—If you are asked to collaborate on a book, or wish to work with a collaborator on your book, hire an entertainment lawyer or utilize the services of a literary agent. Regardless, familiarizing yourself with a collaboration agreement can be helpful.)

Agreement

Eugene Fixbaker (“Fixbaker”) and Anne Spellbinder (“Spellbinder”)

hereby agree to collaborate on a book with the working title, Around The World In Twenty-Six Days (“work”) under the following terms and conditions:

(Sets out the parties and the book covered by the agreement.)

Fixbaker will provide research for the work and his writing expertise and Spellbinder her writing expertise and use of her literary agent to solicit interest in the work. The parties agree to collaborate on the text for the work with Fixbaker having final approval.

(Details the respective responsibilities of the parties and the contribution of each party. Tip—Be as specific as possible to avoid conflict.)

The work will be written in first person detailing travel tips for completing a trip around the world in twenty-six days. The length of the completed manuscript will approximate 250 pages. Spellbinder agrees to provide photographs from a recent trip abroad for the work.

(Specifies the theme of the book, the length, and one author’s responsibility to provide photographs. Tip—Book description essential. Make certain the parties understand clearly the book that is being written.)

The parties agree that an acceptable draft of the manuscript, subject to Fixbaker’s final approval, will be completed on or before September 1, ____. At that time, the manuscript will be submitted to Afterburner Literary Agency for evaluation by Spellbinder’s agent. Revisions shall be performed by the parties forthwith so that the manuscript and accompanying query letter can be submitted by the agent to selected publishers by October 1, ___.

(Details the completion date for the manuscript, one party’s right to approval, and a timetable for submission to the agent and potential publishers. Tip—Be realistic as to deadlines so that there is no rush to forward material before its time. You only get one shot with agents and publishers—make certain the material is the best of the best.)

The parties agree that they shall be fifty-fifty partners in the work. To that end, all expenses and any and all revenues from all sources for the work shall be shared. The parties designate Afterburner Literary Agent as their sole literary representative.

(Sets up financial arrangement between the parties. Tip—Essential to any agreement so there is no question of who gets what. Most collaborations are fifty-fifty but others may be tilted toward one party.)

Credits for the work shall read, “Around The World In Twenty Six Days” by Eugene Fixbaker and Anne Spellbinder. The parties agree to perform all services, including promotion and marketing of the book, under the auspices of any contract with a publisher. Fixbaker shall have final approval over the selection of the said publisher.

(Specifies credits for the respective authors and the right of one author to have final approval. Tip—Detailing credits is as important as the financial arrangements. Be clear so there are no misunderstandings and hard feelings. Also—providing one party with final approval provides solution when disputes arise.)

If the work is not acquired by a publisher, the parties agree to consider alternative means of publishing, including self-publishing. The parties agree to negotiate in good faith the particulars of such an endeavor. If no publisher is selected and self-publishing is not attempted, the parties agree to shelve the project for a one-year period of time. When that has expired, the parties agree that new submissions may be made, but if none are, the work becomes the property of Fixbaker.

(Provides out-clause in event manuscript is not publishable.)

The parties agree that all decisions made regarding the work shall be with the consent of the other subject to the approvals mentioned above. This agreement shall not be revised without the written consent of the parties. The parties agree that in the event of any disputes the law of Ohio shall govern and that said dispute shall initially be submitted to the American Arbitration Association for resolution.

(Covers boilerplate details regarding essential elements of the agreement.)

Signed this ____ day of ___, ____.

______________

Eugene Fixbaker

______________

Anne Spellbinder

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Hemingway and Agent Submission Record

Posted by Mark Shaw on October 7, 2008

Finding the proper literary agent to represent your book is a key ingredient to becoming published. I know firsthand about this since my New York agent recently sold a book of mine after only two weeks. He believed in me and the subject matter of the book, knew the editors who might be interested, and then sent off the book proposal to them. Last Thursday night, I received the good news that a terrific publsher had purchased the book and that a fresh biography of the spiritual guru Thomas Merton (see my blog at www.mertonandfriends.wordpress.com for more about him) will be published in the fall of 2009.

Hemingwaywantabes, here’s a tip for you from How To Become a Published Author: Idea to Publication mentioned above. When you start the process of seeking an agent, keep an “Agent Submission Record.” Here’s one to guide your efforts:

Agent/Publisher Submission Record

Document: Book Proposal—Las Vegas, A Novel

(Tip—Prepare one sheet for each submission. Print and collect in loose-leave notebook marked “Submissions.”)

Submission Date – June 12, __

Agent/Publisher Information - Rosalie Thompkins Agency

56 West 57th Street

New York, NY 20002

212-789-7890

RThompkinsAgency@aol.com

Contact at Agent/Publisher – Jeanette Furber, Agent

Four – Six Week Reaction – No response, telephoned agency. Spoke with Furber’s assistant. Proposal in stack to be read. Estimated time—two weeks.

Follow-up – 6/17—Furber’s assistant telephoned. Requested full manuscript. Forwarded by Fed Ex.

Revisions, if an ___________________________

___________________________

Decision – Hooray! Jeanette has agreed to represent book. Suggested revisions being forwarded.

Outcome – Revisions completed. Submitted to Jeanette. She submitted it to four publishers. Riverhead books’ offer accepted. Hooray again!

(Tip—First submit material to four or five literary agents. Follow-up, keep four to five in play at a time. If no positive response, then repeat process to selected editors at publishing companies. Continue process until successful, but keep good records for future use.)

Being organized and keep track of submissions will come in handy while searching for a literary agent. And remember – it only takes one liteary agent to say “yes.”

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Hemingway and e-books

Posted by Mark Shaw on October 1, 2008

One has to wonder what good old Ernest Hemingway would have thought of e-books. Certainly they did not exist in his day and age but my bet is that he might have been old fashioned about the idea and barked a bit about the fact that “books belong in print” not in some digital form. Or perhaps he would have enjoyed the potential for more people to read his classsic works and also the increased revenues he might have stuck in the pocket of his fishing pants to buy more lures.

No matter, hemingwaywantabes, the digital age is here, like it or not, and since I am one who believes in trying new things, the book “How To Become a Published Author: Idea to Publication” is now available digitally at www.smashwords.com. The cost – a miserly five bucks. When paid, you may download the entire book to read, or use as a pillow for your black Labrador.

The smashwords site is easy to use, and the deal a fair one (no subsidy publisher here), but a word of caution. E-book rights may be valuable and you don’t want to assign them before you have a contract to publish your book in the traditional manner. When a publisher agrees to publish your book, it will want all the rights and you may run into trouble if you have assigned the e-book rights away.

Regardless, take a look at the smashwords site. And if have a book you think might be right for them, give it a shot.

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